Feedback on first music video draft

The improvements in the feedback we got were:

• there needs to be lip synching in the opening singing part.
• more lip synching needed (mentioned by most people)
• colours edited on southend seem too much (too bold)
• add in more orange as its the theme
• some colours used in editing are too intense for the viewers
• beach scenes need taking out as they are not related
• editing is good but feels over done
• setting is good in till changes to beach
•  some effects are over used
• could have used more shots like close-ups
• could include more quirky transitions
• shot when lip synching-when no singing and just a beat
• some after effects do not match each other. There are harsh and bold colours that come out of no where.
• There are too many strobe effects used
• more OT texts throughout

Good feedback:

• All music video fits with the shooting material
• The shots used are varied and fit next to each other
• explain the other colours used
• images are well in time with sound
• there are lots of good scenes used
• good use of effects when edited
• fun and flows nicely
• camera work is smooth and professional looking

Overall the good feedback was mostly repeated and some of the improvements were repeated. Especially about the effects, the beach, and the lip-synching. These are the 3 main things that will be concentrated on when improving the music video.